Friday, June 11, 2021

unlikey BFFs

kKia Ora  today i would like to show you my story In many ways they were so different. When they stood next to each other, the stark contrast between their appearances was plain for all to see.

Appearances, however, can be deceiving. They were the best of friends….


My story  

 The donkey  and the dog were very different in many ways but when  they were  little they  were good friends and the dog's owners were moving away.   So the donkey  was very sad that he was moving.  When the owner was getting the dog  they wouldn't move so they said  we can go without the dog  but the kids said no no no no! We are not going without the dog. Then the dog and the donkey  were fighting, then the donkey got  hurt because he fell on the ground and got cut from a little dranch. his owner  had to take him to the vet. He was ok but he had to stay there for 5 days so the dog was not happy. So the dog walked home and he was so sad that the donkey was  not there.

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the donkey was  coming home! The dog was so  happy about that. So  the donkey owner got home before  they had to go get the donkey  from the vet, thank you for looking after my donkey  “ that will be  $100  please”  what! Are you a fake doctor...


3 comments:

  1. Malo Nevaeh - tau ke, I like the dog and the donkey are friends. Check that all of the talking has speech marks .... Tino pai kōtiro!

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  2. kia ora Nevaeh AC
    i liked how you said bffs
    how did you get the fire
    you can work on making the words even.
    ka kite

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  3. kia ora nevaeh i like how the donkey and the dog are friends what is the app that you used for 5 days later

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